Hey Stacia, I know this was the first showing and I loved this especially for the first showing. It was beautiful and cool to see. Here's some things I noticed:
- The timing, I would work on it with them a bit because it seems a little unclear wether or not they should being going faster or slower sometimes.
- And the, im gonna call it the "flat back dive" thing they do before hiring the floor. How do you want that? It seems like its suppose to be like a three part thing, like a one two and then three, boom hit the floor.
overall I enjoyed your dance its such a you thing and that's why I feel its important to look over things like timing and explain to your dancers the dynamics of how you move and how they can eventually get there and move a cool like you.
Hey Stacia! Your movement is really interesting and unique. I agree with Brittney about going over the timing to ensure that your dancers know which movements they can enjoy a little longer. I also noticed on a few movements in the first phrase, that there was a little confusion on which part of the body led the movement. Just keep an eye out for that because this in unison would be really powerful. Great work!
Stacia, you're off to a great start with the amount of material you have for the first showing! The movement is unique and reminds me of Picasso. If this is an image that you agree with or are intrigued by, try maybe looking at some of his art for inspiration for movement or formations! Also, just work with the timing more to make sure everyone is on the same page. This as unison movement can be very effective with everyone on the same page, but you have plenty of time to get there! Great start!
Hey Stacia, I know this was the first showing and I loved this especially for the first showing. It was beautiful and cool to see. Here's some things I noticed:
- The timing, I would work on it with them a bit because it seems a little unclear wether or not they should being going faster or slower sometimes.
- And the, im gonna call it the "flat back dive" thing they do before hiring the floor. How do you want that? It seems like its suppose to be like a three part thing, like a one two and then three, boom hit the floor.
overall I enjoyed your dance its such a you thing and that's why I feel its important to look over things like timing and explain to your dancers the dynamics of how you move and how they can eventually get there and move a cool like you.
Hey Stacia heres some of my notes that i had:
- dancers quality of movement: make sure your going through with your dancers the quality of each movement un less you want them to be different
-i see each dancer in there personal bubbles or dancing in their own personal space.
-this piece reminds me of the painting stary night (i don't know how to spell) ... something to maybe to look at an explore
Hey Stacia! Your movement is really interesting and unique. I agree with Brittney about going over the timing to ensure that your dancers know which movements they can enjoy a little longer. I also noticed on a few movements in the first phrase, that there was a little confusion on which part of the body led the movement. Just keep an eye out for that because this in unison would be really powerful. Great work!
Stacia, you're off to a great start with the amount of material you have for the first showing! The movement is unique and reminds me of Picasso. If this is an image that you agree with or are intrigued by, try maybe looking at some of his art for inspiration for movement or formations! Also, just work with the timing more to make sure everyone is on the same page. This as unison movement can be very effective with everyone on the same page, but you have plenty of time to get there! Great start!