Good Job! Your project is fun, colorful, the music is zany, and it gives off a light vibe that we all can use right now. The costumes with the mural work well and having it be a sunny day couldn't be more perfect. The combination of closeups with facial expressions and long shots edited back and forth work effectively in portraying the intention. I love the swipe edit from Taylor to the two of them!!!
A few things that I need you to do it change where it says 'credits' at the end to saying your title, "Chapter One: The ManMade" If you can fix that and repost it for me that would be great.
For next time, you don't always have to follow via editing exactly what you originally did choreographically in the studio. In other words, if movement creates a lull in the momentum and lacks cohesion with the intention, edit it out. The ending section is an example - when they are down low.You can always recap or repeat prior movement clips via editing to fill those moments.
Make sure you are aware of what you are shooting behind your subject (the dancers) as well as the subject. For example, I would have liked to see all shots with the mural rather then the alley background, because they gave off two different vibes. It does seems that you 'were' going for the mural vibe.
Good Job! Your project is fun, colorful, the music is zany, and it gives off a light vibe that we all can use right now. The costumes with the mural work well and having it be a sunny day couldn't be more perfect. The combination of closeups with facial expressions and long shots edited back and forth work effectively in portraying the intention. I love the swipe edit from Taylor to the two of them!!!
A few things that I need you to do it change where it says 'credits' at the end to saying your title, "Chapter One: The ManMade" If you can fix that and repost it for me that would be great.
For next time, you don't always have to follow via editing exactly what you originally did choreographically in the studio. In other words, if movement creates a lull in the momentum and lacks cohesion with the intention, edit it out. The ending section is an example - when they are down low.You can always recap or repeat prior movement clips via editing to fill those moments.
Make sure you are aware of what you are shooting behind your subject (the dancers) as well as the subject. For example, I would have liked to see all shots with the mural rather then the alley background, because they gave off two different vibes. It does seems that you 'were' going for the mural vibe.
Feel free to contact me if you need clarity.
Here‘s the video with the fixed credits! Thank you for you feedback!
https://youtu.be/0PSzWhSUKBc