It's wiki-whacky, and I like this idea. Many crazy camera angles, swipes, rips, and circles as well as funky edits can really heighten and match the movement, music, mural, and the overall intention.
You have a slow part of choreography toward the end that could use more movement. It could even just be the girls making faces, goofing off, and laughing into the camera outside in natural daylight - not necessarily in the same location. If you do this, I also see it shot closeup from below and above...in a whacky way. Get a little crazy, bubbly, intoxicated with the camera. 'Dance' while shooting.
It's wiki-whacky, and I like this idea. Many crazy camera angles, swipes, rips, and circles as well as funky edits can really heighten and match the movement, music, mural, and the overall intention.
You have a slow part of choreography toward the end that could use more movement. It could even just be the girls making faces, goofing off, and laughing into the camera outside in natural daylight - not necessarily in the same location. If you do this, I also see it shot closeup from below and above...in a whacky way. Get a little crazy, bubbly, intoxicated with the camera. 'Dance' while shooting.