Hey Stacia, I know this was the first showing and I loved this especially for the first showing. It was beautiful and cool to see. Here's some things I noticed:
- The timing, I would work on it with them a bit because it seems a little unclear wether or not they should being going faster or slower sometimes.
- And the, im gonna call it the "flat back dive" thing they do before hiring the floor. How do you want that? It seems like its suppose to be like a three part thing, like a one two and then three, boom hit the floor.
overall I enjoyed your dance its such a you thing and that's why I feel its important to look over things like timing and explain to your dancers the dynamics of how you move and how they can eventually get there and move a cool like you.
Hey Stacia, I know this was the first showing and I loved this especially for the first showing. It was beautiful and cool to see. Here's some things I noticed:
- The timing, I would work on it with them a bit because it seems a little unclear wether or not they should being going faster or slower sometimes.
- And the, im gonna call it the "flat back dive" thing they do before hiring the floor. How do you want that? It seems like its suppose to be like a three part thing, like a one two and then three, boom hit the floor.
overall I enjoyed your dance its such a you thing and that's why I feel its important to look over things like timing and explain to your dancers the dynamics of how you move and how they can eventually get there and move a cool like you.