Nyree! I really enjoy what this piece is so far and I feel that you're beginning has potential to be a strong and solid start to the piece. With that in mind, I notice there is the intent for sharpness and angles within this work, make sure to work on that with your dancers. Also, the use of your puppetier is effective but I am curious to see what else she can do. Like Cynthia was saying, give her a moment there and find ways to play with movement. There is a lot of great material here, just work on the confidence with your dancers (and yourself) as I see this being quite a piece!
Nyree! I really enjoy what this piece is so far and I feel that you're beginning has potential to be a strong and solid start to the piece. With that in mind, I notice there is the intent for sharpness and angles within this work, make sure to work on that with your dancers. Also, the use of your puppetier is effective but I am curious to see what else she can do. Like Cynthia was saying, give her a moment there and find ways to play with movement. There is a lot of great material here, just work on the confidence with your dancers (and yourself) as I see this being quite a piece!