Hello Everyone!
Here’s about half of my first piece “Chapter One: The ManMade” with 1/2 of my dancers doing the basic material. I ask for just general feedback and any patterns you may see in the choreography. Keep in mind this will be filmed in an alley way :)
Thank you!
I see different styles of movement, almost every 8 counts. It starts and stops frequently. The dancers looks like she is practicing rather than performing as it could still be new to her. Perhaps, she is not fully sure of the intention either. With that said, if the dancer's energy is pumped up to 150% and fully performs, and the movement ideas flow more, this can be a strong work. Your choreography has to be as big and bold as the colorful mural in the alleyway. Also, I see multiple edits happening in the final product - even every time there is a new movement phrase.